Hi all,
I recently offered to make a website for my parents' gite. I had never done any web design before but fancied a crack at it! I loved the process so much I'm learning new web skills and trying to get a foot in the industry.
This was my first site, I'm fairly pleased with it but would love to know what the experts think!
http://www.paradiseinfrance.com
Thanks in advance for any help.
Keith
Designed a site for my parents, what do you guys think?
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Well done Keith. For a first attempt you've done a good job. The internal pictures need to be bigger, because you can't see them very well, and personally I don't like the dotted line. But it's a nice, clean easy site. I'm sure you'll continue to tamper with it anyway, and refine it as you go along
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They seek him here, they seek him where?
They seek him here, they seek him where?
Congratulations Keith - have not inspected it in great detail but first impression terrific - wish I were capable of doing something like that.
If I were being really picky I would say you need some more bedroom pix and that the one with the twin is a bit dark.
If I were being really picky I would say you need some more bedroom pix and that the one with the twin is a bit dark.
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Hard to fault to my (amateur) eyes. My marketing advisors always bang on about a call to action. You have it with the buttons on the right but perhaps they could stand out more with a brighter colour or a more dynamic phrase such as "Grab your own slice of paradise". Another possibility is to make a couple of YouTube clips which you can embed (if you have any video footage of the property or surrounding attractions).
Good work - your parents will be delighted!
Good work - your parents will be delighted!