Hi guys,
I was hoping that some more experienced members would cast an eye over my holiday lettings site and provide any input that could possibly help improve the advertisement
http://www.holidaylettings.co.uk/rental ... eiro/48265
Kind regards
SH
Please review my Holiday Lettings page
Hi SH,
I do not have time to go through your listing but did look at the home summary which appears in search results on Google and HL.
This is what you have....
"Holiday villa with swimming pool, golf nearby in Carvoeiro
Great Rates for 2010 - Enquire now for details Casa Branco Grande is a 3 bedroomed villa located in the picturesque fishing village of Carvoeiro on Portugal's Algarve coast. The villa is ideal for families or groups of golfers looking to get away for some sun.
The other properties which also appear in the search results 'talk up' their property by using descriptions such as "...luxurious villa is elegant, modern and private"/"Large, traditionally furnished villa in fantastic location"/ "a unique opportunity to enjoy a luxury family holiday"
and there is even this modest description..."This pretty villa is situated in the most sought after area of Galé" Perhaps you too should consider 'talking up' your property for the summary.
I do not have time to go through your listing but did look at the home summary which appears in search results on Google and HL.
This is what you have....
"Holiday villa with swimming pool, golf nearby in Carvoeiro
Great Rates for 2010 - Enquire now for details Casa Branco Grande is a 3 bedroomed villa located in the picturesque fishing village of Carvoeiro on Portugal's Algarve coast. The villa is ideal for families or groups of golfers looking to get away for some sun.
The other properties which also appear in the search results 'talk up' their property by using descriptions such as "...luxurious villa is elegant, modern and private"/"Large, traditionally furnished villa in fantastic location"/ "a unique opportunity to enjoy a luxury family holiday"
and there is even this modest description..."This pretty villa is situated in the most sought after area of Galé" Perhaps you too should consider 'talking up' your property for the summary.
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Hi Shark and welcome to LMH.
It seems to be a lovely villa! It would help if you outlined promixity to local shops, bars, beach etc. Your photos are lovely but it some especially of kitchen lookk a little empty. If you has flowers, plants, glasses etc on tables and worktop it may add more colour Same with potted plants around swimming pool.
Declan
It seems to be a lovely villa! It would help if you outlined promixity to local shops, bars, beach etc. Your photos are lovely but it some especially of kitchen lookk a little empty. If you has flowers, plants, glasses etc on tables and worktop it may add more colour Same with potted plants around swimming pool.
Declan