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Felicanda



Joined: 23 Nov 2016
Posts: 4
Location: Saint-Gervais-Les-Bains

PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 7:51 pm    Post subject: New website review Reply with quote

Hi all

After my first attempt to make a website and severely messing up the coding trying to change a box colour I've created a new one, hopefully taking into account some comments from here.

I'd be grateful for any comments on this one:
http://jolinew.weebly.com/

The URL is just whilst I finish it off then it will move to my proper one.

Thanks if advance
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e-richard



Joined: 17 Oct 2004
Posts: 4872
Location: Algarve, Portugal

PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 8:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice simple, clean.

Slight confusion on your home page. Headline says it sleeps 6 in large bedrooms, but key facts below that says sleeps 4.
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Felicanda



Joined: 23 Nov 2016
Posts: 4
Location: Saint-Gervais-Les-Bains

PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Richard.

I've amended the text to change that.
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PW in Polemi



Joined: 21 Oct 2012
Posts: 1738
Location: A village in Paphos, Cyprus

PostPosted: Fri Jan 20, 2017 9:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lovely view!

Two spelling mistakes occur throughout:

Seperate WC should be separate
Unless used as the name Appartement Joli, the word apartment should be apartment not appartement.

In details of the apartment, you have "Moutain Biking"
Key Facts on the apartment page still show sleeps 4.

The Apartment - Discover More page
Main Living Space is the best place to unwind

Overall, a lovely clean-looking, uncluttered site. Well done!
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Jay GHC



Joined: 07 Dec 2016
Posts: 11
Location: Bridgerule, near Bude

PostPosted: Fri Jan 20, 2017 10:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice clear design and the accommodation looks great!

The only advice I'd have is to make it more clear where your gallery is as thats what most people first look for to get an idea of the place.

But its clear to see why you're well booked for this season Smile !
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VillaAntonioLanzarote



Joined: 03 May 2016
Posts: 67
Location: Nazaret, Lanzarote

PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2017 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi

Like the site , really good

My only feedback is

- Maybe have the extra photos as a "Photo Gallery" with a Page on the menu at the Top

- Maybe add an arrow to the picture "Appartement Joli building" to show exactly where the apartment is located

Hope that helps
Larry
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Aldo



Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Posts: 300
Location: Malta

PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2017 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Felicity, I love the clean look of it, in particular the landing page. I would recommend getting a professional photographer and consider larger pictures. I also think that the photos could make more out of having a drink while looking at the view. A photographer could set up these kind of pictures - always think of illustrating what guests love doing best in your accommodation. Prospective guests want to be led and seduced - you need to provide that link. I also suggest making sure there are no spelling mistakes in the copy. A website should always be a work in progress, so every so often, read it again and think how best to communicate the advantages of staying at your place rather than that of your competitors.
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