Hi please could you have a look at my website all comments would be greatly appreciated as I am not very computer literate.
www.freewebs.com/turkey-rental
website review please
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website review please
MAD WOMAN
Hello Jaya,
I think your apartment looks really inviting, new and fresh.
Your pics are all sunny and bright.
However, I do think the shots of the beds look a bit 'underfurnished' i.e they look a bit uncomfortable, I'm sure they are not but the bedding is a bit sparse. If you can take a few shots with cushions or towels folded, that may help it to look a bit more comfortable.
It looks like you have some extra space to add more detail about the apartment, tell them how bright and spacious it is and how cool it will be in the height of the season. An ideal place for them to spend their holiday in Wonderful Turkey.
I think you have a lovely apartment and am sure you will get lots of interest, It looks so sunny and warm.
Good luck,
Ruth
I think your apartment looks really inviting, new and fresh.
Your pics are all sunny and bright.
However, I do think the shots of the beds look a bit 'underfurnished' i.e they look a bit uncomfortable, I'm sure they are not but the bedding is a bit sparse. If you can take a few shots with cushions or towels folded, that may help it to look a bit more comfortable.
It looks like you have some extra space to add more detail about the apartment, tell them how bright and spacious it is and how cool it will be in the height of the season. An ideal place for them to spend their holiday in Wonderful Turkey.
I think you have a lovely apartment and am sure you will get lots of interest, It looks so sunny and warm.
Good luck,
Ruth
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Thank-you Kipper889 for your comments, will certainly take you up on your advice.
MAD WOMAN
We really liked the website if you did it yourself then you did a good job,I would echo Ruths opinion on the sparse furnishing it will pay for itself in rentals if you bought a bit more stuff ie cushions ,vases with say lillies in false ones mind you and just mainly make it look like a home dont skimp.
Hi Jaya,
Aside from echoing all the other comments -- the place looks very sunny and clean -- I'll also say that I don't really like the first picture on your front page. I think the second photo is much better and shows the same thing as the first. I would consider moving that photo to the first photo and replacing the other with a different scene entirely: perhaps a nice photo of the view from your balcony.
Aside from echoing all the other comments -- the place looks very sunny and clean -- I'll also say that I don't really like the first picture on your front page. I think the second photo is much better and shows the same thing as the first. I would consider moving that photo to the first photo and replacing the other with a different scene entirely: perhaps a nice photo of the view from your balcony.
Brooke
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Thanks Vrooge,
Funny enough I had the the 2 photos the other way around until recently but had to change it because the pool photo was taking ages to load up and I thought this might put people off. also I didn't know how to avoid this!
i will however look at changing the photo.
Funny enough I had the the 2 photos the other way around until recently but had to change it because the pool photo was taking ages to load up and I thought this might put people off. also I didn't know how to avoid this!
i will however look at changing the photo.
MAD WOMAN
Jaya, its a bit late for me, but I just had a quick look and both the pictures on your front page are enormous. And yes, the pool is even more enormous
If you want to send me a PM with your email address, I'll be happy to help you offline to fix that very simply so that you can put the pictures in whatever order you choose.
If you want to send me a PM with your email address, I'll be happy to help you offline to fix that very simply so that you can put the pictures in whatever order you choose.
It looks really nice - fresh and bright. Two comments - although they do echo what already has been said
- pictures take ages to upload and I have very high speed broadband - especially the first picture
- inside looks fresh, bright and clean but....not very welcoming. A bowl of fruit, flowers, bottle of wine and some glasses, set table, cushions, throws on the bed, rugs, coffee table books and bowls would all help create a more homely impression.
i would still book though!
- pictures take ages to upload and I have very high speed broadband - especially the first picture
- inside looks fresh, bright and clean but....not very welcoming. A bowl of fruit, flowers, bottle of wine and some glasses, set table, cushions, throws on the bed, rugs, coffee table books and bowls would all help create a more homely impression.
i would still book though!
I find television very educational. Every time someone switches it on I go into another room and read a good book.