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bananacake
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Cotterdale Cottage Holida wrote:Bananacake
Thank for having a look!
Sorry what is bit too copy heavy...
basically it means too much text on the front page... my view i think is the main home page should have very short punchy text which entice/lead the reader to your "book here" page

if someone lands on a website for the very first time we have very little time to capture the viewers attention and too much copy therefore i dont think does the trick
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Hi bananacake
Had a little change around on the first page what do you think
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very nice! :)

just a thought - one last point... in the contact page you may wish to include the international dialing code for UK for potential guests that want to call from outside of UK? i.e. +44 (0) 191 251...
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Th?anks good idea how is your website going
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i have not really invested much time with it as i really require to some decent pictures first...
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Cotter wrote:Th?anks good idea how is your website going
I thought Kim was planning a war with South Korea?
:oops:
Never try to out-stubborn your guests.
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I am looking forward to the summer so I can get some photos of the cottages outside
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I was thinking bananacake how do you get your bookings if you don't have a website
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casasantoestevo wrote:
Cotter wrote:Th?anks good idea how is your website going
I thought Kim was planning a war with South Korea?
:oops:

LOL :) I think its South Korea attacking the North - why does the media not disclose the reason WHY North Korea attacked the South Korea ship?? there must be some reason behind it?
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Cotter wrote:I was thinking bananacake how do you get your bookings if you don't have a website
actually all my bookings come through Homlidays and HomeAway and a couple of others...

I have an iownerswebsite that i use mainly to reciprocate links so that i can have free listings on some sites (such as VRWD) but for me whats important is updating my Facebook page. So far i have 162 fans :)

I think that offers some sort of credibility to the property and therefore confidence to someone that is assessing whether to rent your property - if you have some sort of fan base that write positive comments on your page then i think that helps

Go on... please be kind and be a fan of my facebook page :)
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