New Website...May I have reviews?
- Clive in Abruzzo
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Dear davhill, you're not going to appreciate this; I think the site looks awful. I think you should scrap it and start again. The images are far too large and the site itself is not centred on the page. If I were a prospective renter, in this day and age, landing on your home page I would immediately click off it - it simply doesn't look professional enough.
That said, deepest, deepest respect to you for nominating your site for review, I certainly wouldn't have the courage to do so.
I suggest that you go to somewhere like http://www.freewebsitetemplates.com/ find a site that looks half-way useful, download it and start modifying it. Just bung it into DW (copy the original css files) and start tweaking. You'll learn millions about css. Go on, give it a try you know it makes sense
Conversely just ignore what I say, after all what do I know?
That said, deepest, deepest respect to you for nominating your site for review, I certainly wouldn't have the courage to do so.
I suggest that you go to somewhere like http://www.freewebsitetemplates.com/ find a site that looks half-way useful, download it and start modifying it. Just bung it into DW (copy the original css files) and start tweaking. You'll learn millions about css. Go on, give it a try you know it makes sense
Conversely just ignore what I say, after all what do I know?
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Aw Clive, that's a bit harsh! (And at least the site has images of the property that you don't have to dig for! )
It's OK folks, Clive knows me a bit.
I have just come to this thread and so most of the big stuff has been fixed now; in any case, I am Totally non Techie!
The apartment looks super. The site to my eye is pleasing and informative. I think it could be improved aesthetically (to reflect the tasteful interior presentation) however by just a few small changes:
• The blue of the menu jars with the header shot: too bright. I would try to match the sky colour if possible;
• Also feel the yellow used for "Valley View Kendal" is too acidic;
• The mouse over colour on the menu could be toned down a few notches to be just a deeper version of the background lilac;
• I would use the same font on the header as used elsewhere. Or if you prefer, change it to something more compatible. The current one is perhaps a bit old-fashioned?
• Still on the home page: the header image dips slightly to the left;
• Speaking of this, the same goes for the Bowness Bay image.
• "Valley View" - you have corrected the impression you gave initially that the lake view was from the property but please may we have a picture of the valley view? It's still a nice selling point.
• Accessibility section: too much info? Include the in-depth stuff if you see it as necessary but maybe preface it with a quick summary of how disabled friendly it is as that would be helpful I think.
I guess it depends on ones market, but I don't see anything wrong in a website for a single holiday rental looking as if it is not professionally designed, as long as it sells the property as well as it can. The changes I have suggested are minor, really, but still worth doing: having put so much effort into it already David, you might as well go for perfection while you're at it!
It's OK folks, Clive knows me a bit.
I have just come to this thread and so most of the big stuff has been fixed now; in any case, I am Totally non Techie!
The apartment looks super. The site to my eye is pleasing and informative. I think it could be improved aesthetically (to reflect the tasteful interior presentation) however by just a few small changes:
• The blue of the menu jars with the header shot: too bright. I would try to match the sky colour if possible;
• Also feel the yellow used for "Valley View Kendal" is too acidic;
• The mouse over colour on the menu could be toned down a few notches to be just a deeper version of the background lilac;
• I would use the same font on the header as used elsewhere. Or if you prefer, change it to something more compatible. The current one is perhaps a bit old-fashioned?
• Still on the home page: the header image dips slightly to the left;
• Speaking of this, the same goes for the Bowness Bay image.
• "Valley View" - you have corrected the impression you gave initially that the lake view was from the property but please may we have a picture of the valley view? It's still a nice selling point.
• Accessibility section: too much info? Include the in-depth stuff if you see it as necessary but maybe preface it with a quick summary of how disabled friendly it is as that would be helpful I think.
I guess it depends on ones market, but I don't see anything wrong in a website for a single holiday rental looking as if it is not professionally designed, as long as it sells the property as well as it can. The changes I have suggested are minor, really, but still worth doing: having put so much effort into it already David, you might as well go for perfection while you're at it!
Nostalgia isn't what it used to be
I'm with GG on this. I can see nothing wrong in a website that's not a shiny professional product, provided it's honestly done and it tells me what I want to know. In fact, I'm considering launching my Jimbo range of 'shabby-chic' website templates. These will give a homespun feel to a rental property and allow the viewer to imagine the real person behind the enterprise rather than a bland corporate product. Could be the next big thing?Aw Clive, that's a bit harsh!
Jim
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- Clive in Abruzzo
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Well, thank you people
I have been listening to - and acting on - most of the comments that you've taken the time and trouble to post for me.
I'm fairly happy with the site as it is now, especially as it's selling the accommodation quite well. Valley View has a three star rating and I particularly wanted to make its website sit in this sector. For this reason, I've kept it simple, on the basis that a site that is too 'flash' (pun intended) might well put off potential guests.
Since I followed some earlier advice, Analytics shows that search engines are the top traffic source (58.72% yesterday).
I think the single most valuable addition has been the online booking facility; in many ways, it lets the system run itself.
Re. the tweaks that have been mentioned, I plan to adopt some of them
Thanks again
I have been listening to - and acting on - most of the comments that you've taken the time and trouble to post for me.
I'm fairly happy with the site as it is now, especially as it's selling the accommodation quite well. Valley View has a three star rating and I particularly wanted to make its website sit in this sector. For this reason, I've kept it simple, on the basis that a site that is too 'flash' (pun intended) might well put off potential guests.
Since I followed some earlier advice, Analytics shows that search engines are the top traffic source (58.72% yesterday).
I think the single most valuable addition has been the online booking facility; in many ways, it lets the system run itself.
Re. the tweaks that have been mentioned, I plan to adopt some of them
Thanks again
Property owner in Burneside, Kendal, Cumbria
Dreamweaver is worth persevering with.davhill wrote:Hmm. It may just be me but I've tried Dreamweaver and found it pretty impenetrable...not really WYSIWYG.
AFAIK, Frontpage was discontinued in 2003. Thing is, I know it a bit, as I've used it before.
Anyways, I've also added online booking (via PayPal as Barclays have been so useless) and gone with Holiday Lettings as well as HR...the booking calendar is very sparse right now.
Pressing on regardless
I started with various (old) versions of Frontpage and now exclusively use Dreamweaver.
I have one site left in Frontpage.
Peter
I used to live on Kendal Green.davhill wrote:Thanks, Peeps
Useful crits here, thank you. It's been a long haul inducing the site to even work (Frontpage 2003 ), However, I can now redo/refine it.
I think I'll have to lose the header shot...it's a pic of 'a' valley but not the Valley View valley...misleading, as you say. Hopefully, this'll get rid of a couple of other problems too.
Meanwhile, coding is a pig anyway...I'll work on it
Thanks again, folks,
David
I can confirm the pic is a different valley !
Peter