Reinvented - Please Review

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Renata
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Reinvented - Please Review

Post by Renata »

www.Vacation-Daytona.com

I have revamped my site (again...)

Please review.
I have tried to feature all of my rental properties on this site.
Please check it out and let me know if you find everything that you need to book a vacation and whether the site was easy to wander around in....

Thanks, in advance.
Renata
www.Vacation-Daytona.com
Renata Gozdziak
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Ju
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Post by Ju »

Hi Renata

I'm sorry to say that the site didn't grab me enought to stay and look around. I think it is because I don't know where daytona is, and there was no photo to attract me in. A good quality photo of the beach or area right at the beginning is a good way to keep people on your site.

If I click on Condos there is an error at the top of the page where two titles appear one on top of anothe (I'm on firefox so that may be why).

There are also problems with the text on the resorts page.

The navigation is easy though, no problems there.

Hope this helps.

Ju
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Post by bazza »

Hi,

My first thoughts are......terrible colours! Red and yellow...looks cheap. Lots of good information though :)
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Post by Renata »

I have fixed the problems that Firefox saw....
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Post by Ju »

Renata

Yes, it is now much clearer with no overlapping text.

Ju
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Post by Clexane »

Renata,

More pictures and larger to entice people in. You need to describe the property and avoid general statements - be specific.

Its the pictures that will sell your place. Contact us is for a lter page - not the main page which is valuable space to get your message across.
So you wanted a holiday home in france ...

www.villaemmanuelle.com
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