Partridge,
You've done it! Congratulations.
I like the look you've chosen, and these iowners sites seem to be put together well.
A couple of suggestions:
Is it possible to change the large title from "costadelaluzapartment" to something else, perhaps just "Costa de la Luz Apartment"? Likewise with the page title -- it would be great if you could change it to something more descriptive. Then again, I don't know if that's possible within the framework of the site's construction.
Your photo gallery is great! A couple of them seem a little "this is the family vacation slideshow," though. Is that level of informality what you're going for? It's true that showing a bunch of happy people can elicit the "I wish I was there, too!" feeling. However, my personal preference is to try and keep posed people out of the pictures on my web site, so that potential clients can visualize themselves there, rather than seeing me or my friends/family there. But I can see arguments either way, so... your choice.
There are a couple of shots that might be worth re-taking:
1) Your first picture of bedroom #3 (picture 7 in the slideshow) is taken in low light, or at least it looks that way. The overwhelming color in the photo (for me) is brown, and the feeling I get from it (for me) is "blah." I hope that isn't too harsh, and if so I'm sorry. But I only mention it because it's clear from the
next picture of the same bedroom that it's actually quite colorful and cheerful. For example, the walls are a sunny yellow, not a faded cream. So I think the first picture could use a re-take to bring those colors in, because right now it's not doing that room justice.
2) Picture 3, of the lounge area, is smaller than the others for some reason.
Is that an orange tree in your lounge area? Cool!
One other thing I was wondering. Does everyone who considers the Costa de la Luz as a vacation spot know that it's just across the river from Portugal? If not, it might be worth mentioning briefly on the home page. It's like staying in two countries for the price of one!
Like I said, perhaps all Europeans know that, but I didn't until I looked on Google Maps.
Overall, I think you (and iowners.com) have done a great job!