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Topcat
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Post by Topcat »

Hi Moondog,

I know you didn't ask for a review, so sorry if you think this is a cheek, but I thought you might like to know that I can't read the yellow writing.

Place looks lovely, though. I'm surprised that the little map you provide mentions Argeles and Banyuls, but misses out Collioure, which I would have thought was a big attraction (I know you can't help that, but it might be worth a mention as an accessible and popular beauty spot, and I don't see a rference to it on your site. Mind you I am tired, so perhaps I've missed it).

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Hi TC he did ask for a review, see here:

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I've already put my ore in. :lol:

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I know, I jumped in without checking. I've posted in the right place as well, now.
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Post by Partridge »

Hi Musetta

Good listing and the lead photo is perfect, as already said, it sums up an Italian holiday. I'm sure this was mentioned before but I do feel a little like you're maybe not giving your home enough credit, you state it is not the main selling point and as a prospective guest I might currently agree with you BUT if you could liven up the interior I feel that would change. The interior is crying out for some warmth in colour, such as pictures/cushions/throws/fruit bowl/flowers etc.
Don't waste energy on things you can't change.

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Post by Musetta »

thank you so much for the kinds words :-)

some sprucing up is going to have to wait until I'm over again in a few months...have other photos with fruit bowl, etc. but...having fireplace problems (long story in another thread) and the fireplace may not be operable...thought it was easier to just pull out that feature than to find other photos...all mine were taken in winter and have a big fire going :-) and didn't want to advertise it falsely...also...I was there taking winter photos with a nice fire...they seem to look out of place advertising now in the Spring! didn't think of that when it was freezing in Jan. and I was thrilled to have a nice, cozy fire :-)

Thanks! note to self: COLOR (!) :-) will be fufn to go shopping for fun things rather than just all the basics I had to find when I was over last time! :-)
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