Winter revamp.
- tree-peony
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ah i seeeeeeeeeee
am feeling a bit dense today!!
am feeling a bit dense today!!
http://www.gozoluxury.co.uk
actually quite nice apartment in Gozo!
actually quite nice apartment in Gozo!
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- Rosbif
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Not sure how picky you want us to be, so I will look at it from a proof reading/picky point of view rather than content at the moment!!
- Why in the title do you call it 'Chalet DE LA Chamoissiere' and in the text you call it 'Chalet Chamoissiere'?
On The Apartment Page
- Bulleted list, some items have a full stop at the end and some don't
- Where it says Please see Prices and Availability ... etc, there's an extra space after 'Please'
- You have a hyperlink to Shops and Restaurants and the line of the hyperlink goes under the space after as well - not that important, but I am being picky!
- There shouldn't be commas before 'and' throughout - I know some will disagree!
- Last para on this page you have text in brackets and you have a full stop inside the ) and outside.
Serre Chevalier in Winter page
- 1st para there is a space before the comma after 'popularity'
- 3rd para, as above after '1500m'
- Can you make the piste map a hyperlink to a bigger one or something as you can't really see anything from that one
Ski School and Hire Page
- Down the bottom, Equipment hire and Ski passes, should have initial caps on the second word to keep in line with your other sub headings
- The list of phone numbers looks slightly untidy, can you tab them so they all start in the same place or something? Do they also need to all be in caps?
- I would also try and standardise your spacing between paras as you have some bigger spaces than others
Its looking really nice, I like the block of pictures on the Ski School page and other places.
I will leave it there for now until you have done some more tweaks!
Carole
- Why in the title do you call it 'Chalet DE LA Chamoissiere' and in the text you call it 'Chalet Chamoissiere'?
On The Apartment Page
- Bulleted list, some items have a full stop at the end and some don't
- Where it says Please see Prices and Availability ... etc, there's an extra space after 'Please'
- You have a hyperlink to Shops and Restaurants and the line of the hyperlink goes under the space after as well - not that important, but I am being picky!
- There shouldn't be commas before 'and' throughout - I know some will disagree!
- Last para on this page you have text in brackets and you have a full stop inside the ) and outside.
Serre Chevalier in Winter page
- 1st para there is a space before the comma after 'popularity'
- 3rd para, as above after '1500m'
- Can you make the piste map a hyperlink to a bigger one or something as you can't really see anything from that one
Ski School and Hire Page
- Down the bottom, Equipment hire and Ski passes, should have initial caps on the second word to keep in line with your other sub headings
- The list of phone numbers looks slightly untidy, can you tab them so they all start in the same place or something? Do they also need to all be in caps?
- I would also try and standardise your spacing between paras as you have some bigger spaces than others
Its looking really nice, I like the block of pictures on the Ski School page and other places.
I will leave it there for now until you have done some more tweaks!
Carole
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