Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:42 pm
ah i seeeeeeeeeee
am feeling a bit dense today!!
am feeling a bit dense today!!
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:11 pm
I've swapped the pics round on the other collage too, so they look better. Next page..............................
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:15 pm
that works better for me 
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 3:57 pm
Revamp of Serre Che in Winter, and Ski School pages now done. I have fixed the photo gallery links too.
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:09 pm
Helen
On your home page, 2nd para you have a comma and no space before 'and'. Also it says there 'a' several... etc instead of there 'are'
Will continue to next page now ...
Oh also on your navigation menu you still have 'and' on one button and & on others.
On your home page, 2nd para you have a comma and no space before 'and'. Also it says there 'a' several... etc instead of there 'are'
Will continue to next page now ...
Oh also on your navigation menu you still have 'and' on one button and & on others.
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:13 pm
Merci, sorted
That's all for tonight folks, off to a new Asian restaurant tonight.
That's all for tonight folks, off to a new Asian restaurant tonight.
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:13 pm
oh i just refreshed my page and the 'a' has been corrected for 'are' or maybe you just did it, not sure!
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:14 pm
Ah posted at same time you must have just done it!
Will continue to look and leave any comments for you for tomorrow.
Have a nice time
Will continue to look and leave any comments for you for tomorrow.
Have a nice time
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 5:40 pm
Not sure how picky you want us to be, so I will look at it from a proof reading/picky point of view rather than content at the moment!!
- Why in the title do you call it 'Chalet DE LA Chamoissiere' and in the text you call it 'Chalet Chamoissiere'?
On The Apartment Page
- Bulleted list, some items have a full stop at the end and some don't
- Where it says Please see Prices and Availability ... etc, there's an extra space after 'Please'
- You have a hyperlink to Shops and Restaurants and the line of the hyperlink goes under the space after as well - not that important, but I am being picky!
- There shouldn't be commas before 'and' throughout - I know some will disagree!
- Last para on this page you have text in brackets and you have a full stop inside the ) and outside.
Serre Chevalier in Winter page
- 1st para there is a space before the comma after 'popularity'
- 3rd para, as above after '1500m'
- Can you make the piste map a hyperlink to a bigger one or something as you can't really see anything from that one
Ski School and Hire Page
- Down the bottom, Equipment hire and Ski passes, should have initial caps on the second word to keep in line with your other sub headings
- The list of phone numbers looks slightly untidy, can you tab them so they all start in the same place or something? Do they also need to all be in caps?
- I would also try and standardise your spacing between paras as you have some bigger spaces than others
Its looking really nice, I like the block of pictures on the Ski School page and other places.
I will leave it there for now until you have done some more tweaks!
Carole
- Why in the title do you call it 'Chalet DE LA Chamoissiere' and in the text you call it 'Chalet Chamoissiere'?
On The Apartment Page
- Bulleted list, some items have a full stop at the end and some don't
- Where it says Please see Prices and Availability ... etc, there's an extra space after 'Please'
- You have a hyperlink to Shops and Restaurants and the line of the hyperlink goes under the space after as well - not that important, but I am being picky!
- There shouldn't be commas before 'and' throughout - I know some will disagree!
- Last para on this page you have text in brackets and you have a full stop inside the ) and outside.
Serre Chevalier in Winter page
- 1st para there is a space before the comma after 'popularity'
- 3rd para, as above after '1500m'
- Can you make the piste map a hyperlink to a bigger one or something as you can't really see anything from that one
Ski School and Hire Page
- Down the bottom, Equipment hire and Ski passes, should have initial caps on the second word to keep in line with your other sub headings
- The list of phone numbers looks slightly untidy, can you tab them so they all start in the same place or something? Do they also need to all be in caps?
- I would also try and standardise your spacing between paras as you have some bigger spaces than others
Its looking really nice, I like the block of pictures on the Ski School page and other places.
I will leave it there for now until you have done some more tweaks!
Carole
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:30 pm
OK,. picky!! The whole place is Chalet de la Chamoissiere, the apartment is Chalet Chamoissiere.
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:38 pm
Quick glance made me laugh. Your site has its winter clothes on but there's the bright sunshine of the YHM logo 
Is there a winter version of the YHM logo? Corny, I know, but what about a snowflake?
Is there a winter version of the YHM logo? Corny, I know, but what about a snowflake?
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:41 pm
Garri we do get lots of sunshine in the winter too!!!
we do get lots of sunshine in the winter too!!!Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:45 pm
I know that Helen
The YHM logo is a little naff looking and has connotations of 'villa in sunshine'. It sorta speaks to the costa del boy crowd
The YHM logo is a little naff looking and has connotations of 'villa in sunshine'. It sorta speaks to the costa del boy crowd
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:51 pm
It is not what it was intended to do though. YHM properties are not looking for Del Boy!! For now, it will have to stay there, or I risk the wrath of Janskov for removing it
Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 8:55 pm
Like I said, connotationsYHM properties are not looking for Del Boy!!