Winter revamp.

Get some feedback on your site or ad from other rental owners and techies. Also a library of online resources so you can make DIY improvements to your web presence.
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Post by tree-peony »

ah i seeeeeeeeeee

am feeling a bit dense today!! :idea:
http://www.gozoluxury.co.uk
actually quite nice apartment in Gozo!
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I've swapped the pics round on the other collage too, so they look better. Next page.............................. :roll:
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that works better for me :D
http://www.gozoluxury.co.uk
actually quite nice apartment in Gozo!
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Revamp of Serre Che in Winter, and Ski School pages now done. I have fixed the photo gallery links too.
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Helen

On your home page, 2nd para you have a comma and no space before 'and'. Also it says there 'a' several... etc instead of there 'are'

Will continue to next page now ...

Oh also on your navigation menu you still have 'and' on one button and & on others.
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Merci, sorted :D

That's all for tonight folks, off to a new Asian restaurant tonight.
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oh i just refreshed my page and the 'a' has been corrected for 'are' or maybe you just did it, not sure!
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Ah posted at same time you must have just done it!

Will continue to look and leave any comments for you for tomorrow.

Have a nice time :D :D
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Not sure how picky you want us to be, so I will look at it from a proof reading/picky point of view rather than content at the moment!!

- Why in the title do you call it 'Chalet DE LA Chamoissiere' and in the text you call it 'Chalet Chamoissiere'?

On The Apartment Page
- Bulleted list, some items have a full stop at the end and some don't
- Where it says Please see Prices and Availability ... etc, there's an extra space after 'Please'
- You have a hyperlink to Shops and Restaurants and the line of the hyperlink goes under the space after as well - not that important, but I am being picky!
- There shouldn't be commas before 'and' throughout - I know some will disagree!
- Last para on this page you have text in brackets and you have a full stop inside the ) and outside.

Serre Chevalier in Winter page
- 1st para there is a space before the comma after 'popularity'
- 3rd para, as above after '1500m'
- Can you make the piste map a hyperlink to a bigger one or something as you can't really see anything from that one

Ski School and Hire Page
- Down the bottom, Equipment hire and Ski passes, should have initial caps on the second word to keep in line with your other sub headings
- The list of phone numbers looks slightly untidy, can you tab them so they all start in the same place or something? Do they also need to all be in caps?
- I would also try and standardise your spacing between paras as you have some bigger spaces than others

Its looking really nice, I like the block of pictures on the Ski School page and other places.

I will leave it there for now until you have done some more tweaks!

Carole :)
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OK,. picky!! The whole place is Chalet de la Chamoissiere, the apartment is Chalet Chamoissiere.
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Post by Garri »

Quick glance made me laugh. Your site has its winter clothes on but there's the bright sunshine of the YHM logo ;-)

Is there a winter version of the YHM logo? Corny, I know, but what about a snowflake?
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Garri :D :D we do get lots of sunshine in the winter too!!!
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Post by Garri »

I know that Helen ;-)

The YHM logo is a little naff looking and has connotations of 'villa in sunshine'. It sorta speaks to the costa del boy crowd :twisted:
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Post by Hells Bells »

It is not what it was intended to do though. YHM properties are not looking for Del Boy!! For now, it will have to stay there, or I risk the wrath of Janskov for removing it :D :D
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Post by Garri »

YHM properties are not looking for Del Boy!!
Like I said, connotations ;-)
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