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Windy
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Post by Windy »

I had originally thought that it made it look more friendly,
Yes that's where I was too, but I think you have to paint enough of a picture without imposing yourself too much on it, leaving room for the guest to put themselves in there ...

Too much of the "le moi" really can be "haissable" (© B Pascal)
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DrRichard
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Post by DrRichard »

Hi Christine

Sentimental certainly has its place, but maybe not here. I'd suggest something a little more direct, but still talk to your visitors as real people...

- Dr Richard
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