Lay My Hat

Thanks all for the comments, I agree on the `villa for rent` not being clear and I will just bring this down in to the main text until I reword it. Maybe I have gone a bit too far the other way so will re think and try and get a better balance, although I think the area will be important as there is...

Paolo,

I take your point, I knew this would be the one area I would struggle, when you point it out it makes sense. i will do a bit more work on this section.

thanks for commenting.
Juco

Thanks guys constructive critisism and most welcome. vrooje.. I agree with you on more pics and now getting that sorted, there should be a slight improvement on this since you last viewed but still working on the pics. Joanna.. Interesting your positive comments on the pink on white I didn`t like th...

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Hey don`t panick.
Others will be more constructive I am sure but to open for debate....... your availability section shows Mmmm nobody is booking this villa. Its an area that I have been advised to keep out as it can be quite negative if there are no bookings.

Just my pennies worth
Juco

I don`t have a website to link it to other than hotmail, so don`t think I can post it.
I think it would be classed as more than a glimpse but the beach cannot be seen due to the olive groves.

Juco

Hi, I think its beginning to read better now, but please be critical with comments Relax, lie back and soak up the sun on your private roof terrace. Admire the magnificent backdrop of the cotton fields and pine trees on the nearby mountains while sipping your glass of chilled wine. In the warm eveni...

Paolo, sorry my first post didn`t go and then i forgot to put in when retyping. Alexia thanks for your comments its the type of criticism I need. I bounced them off my family and they said `good` I knew they weren`t right, just appealling to my ego. benefits... the views (from terrace) near to beach...

Thanks for the input I have posted below the original and then a further 2 versions...any better? The Villa Original This attractive detached Villa located in Akbuk, Altinkum, Turkey is in a well cared for development which is surrounded by mature olive groves. This spacious villa can sleep up to 8 ...

This is the text I am planning for the home page, I feel that I am not getting a comfortable feel about it, I have re written it 5 times so far. can anyone see anything wrong or am I being too critical. It is my intention to put more detail on a seperate page for the various rooms. please,please be ...

An interesting thread, I am currently having a website being constructed for my villa, the technical side is being done for me but I have to do the editorial and supply the pictures, fortunately I love `messing` around with the computer and thoroughly enjoy doing it, but be assured the amount of tim...

I thought you had Tracey and posted to tell you so and then deleted my post...its on one of those little buttons at the bottom of your post. (WWW)

Juco

I am currently getting some text together for using in my home page after about the 5 th attempt I am still not happy with it.
Am I allowed to post this text on here for some help or ideas.

thanks
Juco