New website review
New website review
Hi everyone - really appreciate your thoughts on our website tidesreachbeachhouse.co.uk many thanks Julian
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I like the style and I'm ok with the grey text box, at least on Safari on my iPad (haven't seen it on a bigger screen).
I guess the text isn't finished yet - 'mod cons' is repeated and you've got 'Tthe' in the same text block.
The house page was initially blank for me too but then loaded after a long delay. Maybe the photo file sizes are bigger than needed?
I'd prefer photos of the bedrooms (and all rooms in fact) with the curtains open in daylight (still keep the lights on). Closed curtains, combined with the lack of outside photos makes me think you're hiding something! Let us know when you've got some new photos - they can make a big difference.
I agree that price list would be useful - we often search with 2 or more possible dates in mind and it's irritating having to keep typing them in on different sites just to see if the price is in our budget.
I hope that's helpful. You're off to a great start
I guess the text isn't finished yet - 'mod cons' is repeated and you've got 'Tthe' in the same text block.
The house page was initially blank for me too but then loaded after a long delay. Maybe the photo file sizes are bigger than needed?
I'd prefer photos of the bedrooms (and all rooms in fact) with the curtains open in daylight (still keep the lights on). Closed curtains, combined with the lack of outside photos makes me think you're hiding something! Let us know when you've got some new photos - they can make a big difference.
I agree that price list would be useful - we often search with 2 or more possible dates in mind and it's irritating having to keep typing them in on different sites just to see if the price is in our budget.
I hope that's helpful. You're off to a great start
Jo
Joint owner of Baker's Cottage in Chester & Chandler's Cottage in Sidmouth
Joint owner of Baker's Cottage in Chester & Chandler's Cottage in Sidmouth
Looks great! Filey is so nice.
Lots of good points here.
Have a good look and spellcheck for typos - there are lots there
"mod cons" I'd add a few more...satellite tv? halogen hob? whatever comes to mind as a highlight. if you say all mod cons but only name one, it comes over as a bit odd to me. Also I think a lot of people won't understand "fibre optic wifi." I'd just say broadband or high speed wifi.
" don't miss out on the chance to spend quality time with the people you love."
This reads a bit negatively to me. I don't think you need it.
"a wonderful place to spend quality time with the people you love."
"a perfect opportunity to spend quality time with the people you love."
or something similar might be better?
"A range of restaurants " - some recommendations here?
The kid's den looks great, I think you could make more of this with a picture and some details on how family friendly it is (same as you have with the dogs)
Definitely agree on pricing being clearer - and would it be worth doing a low season rate for smaller groups, since it's so big?
Lots of good points here.
Have a good look and spellcheck for typos - there are lots there
"mod cons" I'd add a few more...satellite tv? halogen hob? whatever comes to mind as a highlight. if you say all mod cons but only name one, it comes over as a bit odd to me. Also I think a lot of people won't understand "fibre optic wifi." I'd just say broadband or high speed wifi.
" don't miss out on the chance to spend quality time with the people you love."
This reads a bit negatively to me. I don't think you need it.
"a wonderful place to spend quality time with the people you love."
"a perfect opportunity to spend quality time with the people you love."
or something similar might be better?
"A range of restaurants " - some recommendations here?
The kid's den looks great, I think you could make more of this with a picture and some details on how family friendly it is (same as you have with the dogs)
Definitely agree on pricing being clearer - and would it be worth doing a low season rate for smaller groups, since it's so big?
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