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isaxby



Joined: 20 Apr 2016
Posts: 25
Location: Brixham

PostPosted: Sun Jan 20, 2019 1:06 am    Post subject: Finally gone live with the new website Reply with quote

Comments/suggestions welcome

Many thanks

Ian

https://onefishermansloft.co.uk
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stewart-sandeman



Joined: 29 Dec 2015
Posts: 21
Location: Scotland - highlands

PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2019 8:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great website - excellent photos and generally has a modern look - a couple of typos to tidy up

About us has a full stop flying about 4th paragraph
on your website” .

A couple of inconsistencies with Loft and loft - see the apartment
One Fisherman’s loft

I did struggle a bit with the sleeps 2. There is a double bed and also a 3 seater sofa bed - so is it a sleeps 4 apartment? Possibly just remove the word bed from 3 seater sofa - or say that it sleeps 4?

I did find getting to the costs was a bit hard - had a really good look around as it says availability and costs on the tab but |I could not find the costs - got there eventually but may put some off - possible to make it more obvious.

hope this helps

Peter
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newtimber



Joined: 24 Nov 2012
Posts: 1656
Location: Brighton

PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2019 9:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry I really don't like your front page. The reflections and numerous boats and colours combined with the menu floating on top makes me feel ill.

If you hover over the terms and conditions link, the text disappears instead of highlighting.

Your privacy policy does not comply with GDPR as it does not have the prescribed information. I know you say you've used a 3rd party template but some of the clauses they provide have been missed out. I think you need to have the official name and address of your organisation - whether that be a limited company, partnership, or individuals as you cannot have any legal agreement with a website. You also need to include the statement on user's rights.

In addition, you cannot assume user consent for cookies anymore.

Other than this, it is a very comprehensive site and you've put a lot of work into it.
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isaxby



Joined: 20 Apr 2016
Posts: 25
Location: Brixham

PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2019 1:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi both

Thank you for the reviews, much appreciated.

I have corrected the typos and removed "bed" (we used to sleep 4 but now only two).

Will have a look at the other comments regarding costs, GDPR, links etc.

Thanks again.

Ian
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